Very nice! It's a complete sentence that focuses on a solid fact with attribution. It'd be even better if you could get the local angle in there. Perhaps by saying something like: Towson students will graduate with more credit card debt than ever, likely accumulated from unnecessary purchases, etc. What do you think?
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Very nice! It's a complete sentence that focuses on a solid fact with attribution. It'd be even better if you could get the local angle in there. Perhaps by saying something like: Towson students will graduate with more credit card debt than ever, likely accumulated from unnecessary purchases, etc. What do you think?
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